Gwen & Robert, Old Guy, Young Gal

What happened to Linda

Would be nice if Linda could get dumped on with some flair.

Good read

Thank you for a good easy read,looked at your bio am guilty as charged,best wishes to you and your family.

The future

Truly looking forward to more ot your novela's!

Fabulous

Intoxicating read from a very attractive sensual woman. Thanks for your time.

Well, well Susan!

You are a naughty woman arn't you?

Drew :)

You're The Best

Have I told you that before?

Wonderful

Real storytelling talent on display.

Top Notch!

and absolutely 5 Stars! well done...well written...a joy to read.

outstanding

One of the best. Five Stars.

Excellent!

You capture the man's angst marvelously. The sex descriptions are great! Keep up the great work. You are fast becoming my favorite author.

It's almost as if I'm there

Your stories are so vivid and well written I feel as if I'm there in the same place, being with Gwen as Robert was. Please keep writting, Susan
thanks

Excellent Story!

It seems to have become routine to post a response that your work is terrific.

You provide such detailed insight into the emotional turmoil Robert experiences in his struggle with the desire for Gwen and his fear of rejection.

Why did you opt for not having this one rated by your readers I wonder?

It is thoroughly enjoyable and well written.

No Means of Voting.

Since there was not a way to vote, I give you twenty stars for this great entry. You might want to notify the Lit Editors.

Congradulations.

Based on the rave reviews by all your readers you have become a STAR, and all well deserved.

Your writing is wonderfull.

Wow! I read your story, I was hooked by part1. Everyonce in a while I read a good story but yours was a great story! Keep writing and i will keep reading!

Great story

You gave this 'old guy' quite a thrill! Well written with a very nice ending.

Well worth the wait

I really enjoyed this story. Maybe it's because I'm a not-so-young man myself, so I can identify with the character of Robert. I'm also quite shy around women, certainly not the pushy kind, and I sometimes wonder about how many opportunities I may have missed over the years. There again, I'm happy that I don't embarrass myself by being seen as a "dirty old man" (I hope). Anyway, the slow build-up and the anticipation of what I hoped was going to happen made the wait for the consummation worthwhile. Thank you.

No voting stars?

This one is absolutely fantastic!

First Story of Your's I've Read and It Is Good!

I too am sorry there are no stars to vote for you. This was a very good story, even if Robert was almost too self-effacing. Glad he got his hear's desire.

I love your work

I truly enjoyed this story....as a matter of fact, I have enjoyed everything I have read of yours, and since there were no stars for voting, I did something I have only done one other time - not counting comments on my students' papers. I have read all the stories posted here under your real name, please tell me where to find your other work. Please keep writing your stories.

Could really happen

You truly do write erotica and weave very descriptive dialogue in this story. I will immediately add you to my favorite author list. Your story flowed evenly and the plot was very believable, not like some of the fantasy here. please keep blessing us with more of your pearls.

The entire story sounds like a dream to me!!!!!!!