All Comments on 'The Lust Boat Ch. 01'

by Lexinatrix

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Story?

A few sentences...not a story

and no sex? >_>

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Lust!!!???

I'm sure the best is to come... You have to continue... Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
way way too short

Nice start, but don't bother posting in such little pieces. Typically a story is well over 10-15 pages.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Let it build . . .

C'mon, people -- give the author a chance; it looks like we've got something good coming here.

LexinatrixLexinatrixalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Length

This story is nearly 40,000 words long (short novel length, though not structured as a novel). Rather than subject you all to all that scrolling, I've divided it into chapters as many authors do. More chapters will be posted quickly.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Disconnect Pt1 to Pt2

Part 1 looked promising, but there is a gap between the end of Pt1 and the start of Pt2 so I gave up. Look forward to seeing the correction.

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