Stormy Affair

interesting

a lot of build up but nothing to indicate why the daughter would offer to fondle the mother while dad fucked her.

Family affair?

I didn't find much eroticism, everything was too sketchy.
RS

i love the story line

the part where the daughter jumps in bed and then the part wher she sucks n fucks daddy
i dont gtet the part where hse fondles her mother and mom lets her.
Is mom bi or lesbian?
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I really liked it.

I liked the premise of the story, but you really need an editor. There was a shit ton of spelling errors and missing words. I would be happy to help. Maybe in chapter two (if there is one.) you could explain the daughters attraction to the mother. Perhaps they had something already going on. Anyways keep writing. You obviously have some skills.

Good Story

This story is definitely a hot development and turned me on big time.

Inventive story line

I liked it. Don't think it needs an additional chapter, but sure we'd probably all enjoy additional adventures of this family.

Agree with others on editing, but looking past that to the story itself, which I enjoyed.

I loved it so much, I am finnally commenting.

It would be great if the mother started to bring the daughter to orgasm also. Then bring the bff into the bed too for some therapy.

EDITOR, PLEASE!!!

bar be cues - the lightening capital - mu boxers - know tat fr tonight - night shirt t bed n undies - bolt of lightening - between my wife and I - in fr a penny - Kara your in here - extricated my self from - had not idea - jumping u p and down -
ED T/SPLCHEK , please. Good effort otherwise.

hot

ive had dreams of seeing my husband with our daughter for a long time now

It seems as though the mother was into it from the very start. She was frisky, and ready for daddy, as soon as her daughter left after the initial thunderstorm.

great story

would love to read what happens next

Stormy affair

Wish it was my family , dream sometimes of somthing similar

Mmm, I dont see any reason for our daughter to ever leave home ;)