A Clean Shirt

Hot!

Loved IT!

Worse than You-you

This I-I story is worse than the you-you type of silly present-tense stories we sometimes see on Lit..

sweet

Loved the story had me hard and drippin til the end and i came along with them awsome keep it up

Hey cool, I get to be the first comment of substance!

All three of us revisited this story today, since it was up here. Seemed like an opportunity. It's still as hot as ever, but you already knew that. Don't listen to that second anonymous, guy doesn't know what he's talking about.

Anyway, to keep from rambling, we just wanted to thank you for inspiring me (the proper Kuro) to explore my own interest in genderplay and write more in this genre. Now please, write more! ;)

Kurokami and the bois

Sensual in a quiet way

This was refreshingly different. While I am sure it is not for everyone, those of us who do appreciate your story will be looking for more in the future.

Best. Story. Ever

Wow!!!

Great story

It was really refreshing to see the gender play from the other end. The story is well written and the characters entirely believable. Thanks so much for making the effort.

Great Story!

Really good. Reminded me of my old girlfriend and how she loved to wear my leather coat. Hope to see more!

Very nice

Well done.

interesting...

but not really my thing. felt too much like trans mockery since the character didn't know if they were trans or not it was hard to tell which way to take it. found myself cringing at the clit vrs cock and the mocking parts. but for gender queer ...pretty ok :)

genderqueer D/s

Just to clarify - this story is indeed meant as genderqueer D/s play. Mostly I write stories that contain humiliation play or other sensitive things in the BDSM/noncon realm, but because of the subject matter, this one did not end up in that category. Apologies if it's not your cup of tea.

Gender queer and proud

So exquisitely you captured the uncertainty of self discovery for those of us who don't fit on the gender binary. And yes, finding the right words can be difficult, painful, and confusing. But just like you portrayed here... when you find someone your sexuality works with, it is the most amazingly hot sex on this planet!
Thank you, and more please, Daddy!

Wow, until now I never knew..

I have to admit was hesitant about reading this one but truth be told I really liked it. You're right when you say there aren't many of these, this being the first one I've seen. I will defininetly be looking for more. Keep up the good work. ^_^

very well done

Not entirely my cuppa but who cares: it was emotionally credible and well-executed. More like this I'd still read, even though, again, the light d/s isn't my thing, I shut down for some of that. Thanks, good work! :)

Perfect

I've never had a story on lit actually feel like it could happen to me, this was perfect and I've gotten off rough and hard to the realism this reflects for me. Would love to see more daddy, please!

Star counter just broke....won't go past five....

Nice

Makes me wish I lived in London and travelled to your town.

Thank you!

Just wanted you to know that when I read this I recognised something in myself, and I'm so glad I did because I've never seen anything like this story before and it cleared a lot of stuff up about me when I recognised it.

I'm not a scruffy, unattractive girl.....maybe I'm just meant to be a boi? :D

Happiness.

Please more...

I NEED more stories like this. I wanted to be that boi so bad...

Still one of my favorite stories

I think I found this story last year, but I keep coming back to it. It's just that good! Still hoping for more stories with this particular boi and daddy pair. :D

Why were you not on the train today?

Just into the city from Schiphol, and you were nowhere to be found. How disappointing ;)

ty

Thank you for this. Nicely done and I'm thrilled to finally see myself reflected in a story. It means a lot.

Awesome!

I loved this story so much! At times when I am masturbating, I fantasize I'm a business man wearing a suit & tie having sex & getting blow jobs from beautiful women & I'm a straight female. I do love the look & feel of buttoned up shirts & ties on me. This story was beautifully written & perfect! If you get the chance, you should write more involving these two. I would definitely read it. Thank you!!!!!

why can't this be me

this story makes me so horny and I wish it happened to me

You are good

This is not my kink, but it certainly turned me on. You are really a very gifted writer, and your ability to write about sex is outstanding. This is the third or fourth of your stories I've read, and they ALL push my buttons. Thank you for sharing your gifts.

Perfect balance between realistic and fantastic

This is so great--the emotions of this boi discovering themselves, the slight insecurity of the older daddy, the shame giving away to pleasure... it's so vivid and so well-done. Well-played.

That was beautiful.