All Comments on 'Chiropractic Checkup'

That was hot!

Fun direction hope you continue the story

What a lame totally unrealistic story with no detail about anything!! that is a couple of minutes I will never get back!!

Totally, totally lame!

Rape!

The story was well written, no grammatical errors, or if there were, I didn't catch them; so well done. But the story did move exceptionally fast, and there wasn't very much depth. There wasn't very much character building, or intense descriptive moments for a quick cum here or there. Next time, maybe give the story a bit more length than just one page? Develop the characters a bit more, add more descriptive language to run everyone's imagination, and to heighten the experience. I don't think it was enough for a quick cum for anyone, but overall, well-written and easy going.

This hit the spot. Incredibly hot and superbly written! Looking forward to my session next week with my stunning chiro.

I've never needed to go to a chiropractor, but if I need one i'd like to visit Dr. Henderson's office. Just give me the address.