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What's this? Repeating a Chapter?
Your Chapter 8 posted here is the last half of your Chapter 7. I think you need to some investigating and see where you made your mistake. Sorry, I'm just not into rereading the same chapters over again.
WTF?
This series seems to be wandering around. The original premise has been so buried that the later chapters make less and less sense.
Time to have a fatal car accident for the whole cast of characters
As I Commented Before in Earlier Post at the End of Chapter 8
Sorry mate, went on vacation and I posted my comment just before I left and I just now got back. Your chapter 8 is a repost, word for word, of the last 2/3rd's of the chapter 7. I tried to e-mail you but was unable to get through to you. I like the story and hope that you can do something about it. Keep on writing!
Same as the previous Chapter...
I know I am supposed to log in and use a name, but I just wondered if you know that chapter 8 and 7 in this series are the same... I would like to read the missing chapter as you writing is so engaging and I feel that I am missing something important...
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