An interesting conclusion. Graphic but not at all graphic in the way erotica usually is. I think your work might be moving away from this genre. Maybe you should try posting these somewhere that has wider readership.
I think I missed a chapter here. They went to the Hypnotist show and the she had the baby. Cannot find the missing chapter . But overall very good one. Emotional.
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An interesting conclusion. Graphic but not at all graphic in the way erotica usually is. I think your work might be moving away from this genre. Maybe you should try posting these somewhere that has wider readership.
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I think I missed a chapter here. They went to the Hypnotist show and the she had the baby. Cannot find the missing chapter . But overall very good one. Emotional.
What happened to chapter 8?
Ch 08 as posted was a duplicate of Ch 07
Hey!!!!?
Chapter 8!!!???!!!
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