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Good Story!!!
Great sex I love short stories with action in them. Thanks for sharing.
MONETARILY THAT IS TRUE
now factor in the un-tangibles and watch the $$$$$. TK U MLJ LV NV
Please
Don't write in the present tense, it's unreadable.
Unreadable?!
Anon, what exactly were you reading?
It was perfectly readable.
Enjoyable
Exciting and initially intriguing. After a certain point it becomes pure stroke, but the telephone call at the end is a fun idea.... I wonder what the security cameras got..
Wrong category.
I don't know why you put this is the Romance category.
It belongs in the cheating area. A quick fuck has nothing to do with romance regardless of what teenagers think.
Great story
Cheaters are like a cancer of goodwill in our society. Playing with another human's emotions is very risky business. Revenge can cover lots of territory as this author explores. The story was narrowly focused but was extremely well written. I felt there was little romance but there was great chemistry with Kimberly. Thanks for the effort.
Meh
Nothing terribly exciting. What does the title have to do with the story? Thanks for the offering.
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