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Last Mission Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/10/12

Interesting

I am curious if she will get her revenge or be corrupted

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by 60andhorny05/10/12

very good

Interested to see what happens to her. Excellent writing makes the story easy to read.

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by LadyParts05/11/12

Excellent!

Dayuuum, she is so tough! Really like this story. Keep going!

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by Anonymous05/12/12

Press On!

Don't leave us hanging! Much more needs to be done in trying to break Susan.....

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by cckuay05/13/12

Please comment

Dear readers,

Please take a moment to comment on any of my Last Mission chapters.
Your comments, positive or negative, stimulate me more than you may be aware.

Author

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by Anonymous05/16/12

Constructive Criticism

The story for the most part is really good and I do plan to read the rest of it, just one thing I have to point out: while Ivan is working her over as if preparing to be a slave, he shouldn't be doing anything that will leave a mark and thus ruin the product, especially if they are for the higher class clients more than willing to pay for perfection.

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by lioness_7106/03/12

still a good story

The only thing i would suggest is an editor. Literotica has a list of users who are willing help authors.

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by austin_voy07/11/12

Five stars for starters

Then heaps of praise! This is a great story with spectacular illustrations!

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by chytown02/05/13

This Is A Great Read****

It's way out there in an exciting way. Thanks for sharing.

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by Bfreetorun02/14/13

Author: I am enjoying this story immensely.

Please have it finish in the last posted chapter, I have already been disappointed in two other of your stories by not being able to get to the end of the story even at this late date. While a great story, all of them, it is so disappointing to see (TO BE CONTINUED) at the end of the last posted chapter. If this one ends the same way I will be disappointed and forced to not read any other of your works, we will both be deprived in that case. Thank you.

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