All Comments on 'You Never Even Wrote Ch. 05'

Show a little bit of pride in your work and proof read/edit or find an editor to do it for you. Your punctuation and lack of capital letters most of the time they were needed made me stop reading this chapter half way through.

need to puncuate. Don't leavr use hanging we want to find out who Jennie is..Is she his stalker??????

The story has potential, but, be more careful with your phrasing and use of punctuation etc. Good effort, so let's have the next chapter please.

who is jenny?! its soo good, i cant wait to see what happens next.

You guys want me to write better, I'm getting an editor i really am its just extremely hard to find one right now, i'm using the volunteer editor program but still no one, i promise i'm trying now though...