Kip and Jon Get My Wife

Another Sick Author...

As one commentator mentioned recently, the quality authors have stopped posting to this site due to the flood of "cuck" sicko postings. Whoever is screening the postings is doing a pretty pathetic job as the majority of LW postings are just plain sick and disgusting.

To the last comment. Don't be such a fucking moron.

Authors have stopped because they're sick of being harangued into a corner by idiots like you, who attack any story that doesn't fit your mentally precious narrow- minded, imbecilic ideas of what constitutes erotica. So fuck off. Five stars for this author.

Last entry

You are the imbecile.Too many cuck stories for the last 6 months,you can start to count now if you know how.LW should now be"known" as Cuckold Husband stories.

Lacks a good work up.

Good try. The story was to short & lacks a good work up to the juicy parts. I like the theme of the story though.

Why would he want her?

Who in the hell would want slimy thirds on their wife?
I do think that she was just telling he that she has been fucking around for a long time and that he is a nothing in her eyes.
Oh and the standard , I bet she would castrate and then divorce him if he was to even kiss another woman.

Kick her ass to the curb and get yourself tested for STDs.

to don't be a fucking moron

And your point is, first off they are not authors they are sickos second who cares where they go as long as they go and take as many idiots like you with them.

WTF is this??????????

Was this a story? I know it's a Piece of Shit, Leave the writing to those who can and go back to stroking yourself. You loser.

More Cuckold Fodder

1* Seems like this kind of story needs its own demented category anymore. Why so many of these? Are there that many men who like sloppy seconds,thirds whatever. Do not underdstand it. Really sad.

and you are married to this whore why

ditch the bitch and get a wife

Great story

Not anything better than your wife surprising you with a spontaneous fuck sessions showing her hot body off and getting her pussy good and wet for you. Five stars *****

Loved the Story

It sounds to me like your wife enjoys being the center of attention, as do I. My hubby has shared me on several occasions and we both enjoyed it, and this story has brought back some sweet memories from our last vacation. Please continue to write more like this and don't worry about the nay sayers who aren't confident enough to live out their fantasies like we do.

Gotta love the spontaneous & fun Hotwife!

Great post! Thanks for sharing!

God, when will they ever learn

To put this crap in fetish. I agree with the other guy, anymore staying married to a whore like this desires her and any man who gets a hard on watching someone else fuck his wife doesn't have the self respect to desire any woman.

this author cannot write

where is the story, just go to it and cheat and husband stands there like a shumck. no begining no end, why just some lousy writing.

Anonymous

Funny how most or all of the negative comments are from anonymous people. I laugh at that that. I can take critacism. Thanks to those that like. If you don't like my stories then don't read them. I am always trying to improve my writings so constructive crtacism is fine. More to come from my fantasy and crazy mind.

s'ok

needed a little more insight to the marriage. did they ever talk about sharing or him wanting to see her get banged? nobody seemed drunk enough to just allow this to happen and her 'anger' doesn't justify the impromptu tag team session. but it's s'ok as a quick sex story. thanks for the effort.

"Critacism"?

It's good that you can take criticism, since you obviously can't spell it even given two tries. Yep, I'm one of those bad old anonymous commenters. So you can laugh some more.

Same old same old cuckold wimp story. The wimps will love this.

Take your time and set things up.

You need to take time with it, sweetie. Let your characters develop and build. Show a logical course as to how the events unfold. That will actually make the story a lot hotter. Just an "oh wow. they're going to fuck my wife" out of the blue like that doesn't really turn anyone on. Keep trying though, hon.

Kelli

Oh No Another One

I can't say I'm enthused about another cuckold writer on this site. Can I possibly convince you to imagine a romance or at least an erotic coupling story in which the man has a set.

just another slut story

and Nancy just told the world about how much of a fag her husband really is, the rest of the cucklover will love this crap.

Silly Boy

Women are for men, not gay boys.

Hey writer, you're not good enough to be called an author

take away all the criticism of the anonymous and what's left, a couple of wimps who get off watching their wives get fucked by a better man, lol. laugh all you want writer, if this is the best you got to offer, I hate to see you at your worst. you already made my wimpy "do not read" list so I'm taking your advice and not read your crap anymore

Forget anonymous!

Its easy to say things to diminish people's confidence hiding behind a masking alias. Your writing has been read and I have yet to read anything of merit from 'anonymous'... Keep at it!

Way too short!

Take your time and build up more slowly. It was over way too quick to actually be very erotic.

re: Anon-to the last comment

To give a story like this "5" stars says volumes about you. This and Murphys621 crappy story have been the worst I've read this year. I always thought "Literotica" was a more classy erotic site. Stories they have been approving lately tells me otherwise. Too bad, this site is going right down the wimpy cuckold road, with some of the worst writers I've read in a long time. The good writers are posting less and the worst ones are posting more. Bad news for us readers who enjoy good erotica. Sad.

Manjanek, guys like you are hilarious

You rant and rave about anonymous, because your real name is Manjanek, right? Funny, I've looked and haven't found a single story of yours on here yet. Why? I wonder why guys like you, that lap up other man's leavings from your wife, worry about what others think.

He should have thanked his friends...

He should have thanked his friends for giving him a reason to get rid of a cheating wife...Will he take the opportunity to divorce her? 1* because this question wasn't answered...