All Comments on 'Wish You Were Here'

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oibiscoitooibiscoitoalmost 12 years ago
Very nice!

Subtle and erotic - compelling and captivating.

Wish i was there...

ChrisTor22ChrisTor22almost 12 years ago
low-keyed and believable.....

Very interesting approach....and I hope just the beginning!!

Love to read well-edited, evenly paced stories which can conjur up images that match the words....

Onward!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
great story... please add another chapter!

Really enjoyed the POV. Hope to see more.

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