All Comments on 'His World - School Ch. 01'

This is a poorly written attempt at a story; you're obviously just pouring out a fantasy you have with little regard to plot, character or pacing. Slow down, put some thought into it and try again.

Y'know, usually I'd agree with anonymous. Usually you'd want build-up and conflict and character development. However, this is just so unabashedly ridiculous, that I like it. And usually I hate piss stuff. So over-the-top. I dig it. Keep it up!

I agree. It did the same for me.