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Taken By Fire: Ignited Ch. 05

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/24/12

It's amazing!

Please post the next chapter soon!!!!!!

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by Anonymous09/12/12

Waiting

When are you posting another chapter? i need to know where ethan and lilly's relationship is going?!

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by raspberilicious10/29/12

Love it!

This story is amazing

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by spearish04/17/13

The worst sex scene ever

Your writing is too stilted ...like a bad school play where they all fluff their lines ...it has no flow or real emotion sadly .

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