All Comments on 'Operation: Final Fantasy'

Nice story

Please tell me that you are writing the second chapter?!

I think I have seen this story before. I will not spoil it for others. What I saw either had a sequel or had several pages. I look forward to a sequel from you.

Thanks for the update. This site can really use new talent like you. Looking forward to the continuing story.

Great story and writing. I would like to read the further adventures - great read does not need much tweaking.

I like it; I love it; I want some more of it; to steal a phrase from a country western song. Thanks and hurry up with the rest of it. Please.

Can't wait for the next submissions!!

'Imitating Brianne' but well done and some interesting dialog. There are only so many plots and even Shakespeare borrowed. And if you were going to borrow, that sure is a great one to be borrowing from. Now lest see if you can bring this old man to tears as HLD did.

BTW, complements to the editor.

One of my coworkers told me I needed to name my 2003 Dodge Dakota quad cab when I bought it so I called it Duke. That's the only vehicle I ever named.

What about the rest of the story? Phph

Waiting for the plot to level out............but a good read

Soon he'll be calling her by her real name- MOMMY!