All Comments on 'Redemption'

great start. short - good setup - makes you want to know about all three. waiting for the interaction. gave you a 5 for what you did so far. will look at the rest of your work.

It is quite obvious that the culprit is the girl - however I am going to check out where I have seen this earlier - post very soon and a longer chapter, thanks!

You have already left me asking questions which is always good. If the Alpha has found his mate then she must in the end be a good soul or so I hope. But watching everything unfold sounds like it will be fun. So I do look forward to the continuation of your story.

Nice start. You already piqued my interest.

It feels a lot like another story I have read, can't place which one yet though.

I appreciate everyone's comments. I'm so glad it is piquing some interest. This is the first time I've ever shared any of my writing with anyone, so feel free to continue to share your thoughts. As for the story being similar to another one, that is completely unintentional. I had already begun working on the second chapter when I submitted this, and I hope to surprise you with how this turns out. Please keep reading!