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Good start
I'd rather it went a little slower but this is a good start, please continue!
Have to agree...
Go just a bit slower with a bit more build up. Other than that? Nicely done.
Loved it !!1
Looking forward to more of this story !!!
Good Start, Waiting for the rest!
Nice
Totally agree with the others here... great job
Great Start
You're off to a fantastic start. I am excited to see where you go with it and how far she will be pushed. I wouldn't mind a few glimpses of what she's thinking/feeling about her transformation.
Good start
Very nice story. I hope it continues.
I wish I was smart enough to do mind control
Callies body makes me wish him continued luck with his subliminal messages.A man needs a woman with big tits and a tight body to be around constantly!
Your story is fantastic ! Very well written and a great story to build up the reader.
Yes, please take the story to a new level where Callie wants to get with him outside of work, so there are no problems with co-workers. Thank you !!
I want more!
This was awesome, i'd love to read more. make another chapter soon please!
Three Words
More More More
Great story!
Hope you come back and write chapter 2 sometime!!
Liked it but only a three (and it's not fucking awesome,just o.k.) as the plot is ....
....overused and the pace is typical of the fatal mistake mc authors make so often- it would take months just to get a small change in her "attitude". Commenters who are creaming already over this should spend a year or three on the Erotic Mind Control site to ferret out the few truly "awesome" mc stories on the web. Usually they are pretty twisted though. I guess maybe you interspersed some subliminals in the story that affected the readers?!
Nice Start S.L.U.T.
Awaiting for more of the ongoings of S.L.U.T. and your adventures with Callie!
Needs
This definitely has possibilities. BUT, where is Ch 2?
looking forward to the next instalment
Update?
More please! The entire chapter was masterfully well done in the way a that only a good writer knows how..!
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