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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Control

This story is mind control at its best.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
great

Awesome story

sublockedsublockedabout 8 years ago
Nice little Story. Well done!

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It was well written and the suspense kept building right to the end. You never gave out too much information, just enough so that I thirsted to get more...oh my God...just like Bobbi! LOL

Your wish is....my.....command....

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
coming back to this

I come back to this story every time I visit your page (as well as Only Just Begun); probably also because I keep wondering what the story would read like from Bobbi’s perspective...

Anyway it’s wonderfully written and hot

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