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very different from the usual
This short piece has a lot of potential and is very imaginative. I am giving it a 5 based on that and the hope that the thread is continued. Keep up the good work.
Interesting.
I'm intrigued enough to want another chapter.
Really enjoyed the tone of this story
I don't really have much more to add that's different from what other people have said. Great story! Very original
Wanting more
Great story I really hope there's going to be a second part I want to know what happens next
Excellent concept.
Kudos for this very 'human' story and, well written. Wouldn't it be nice if it explained all the strange thinga that do appear to happen in our medicre lives? More please!
I would like to read the return visit
Next chapter please and than you for taking the time to write - good work is always appreciated.
Nice
Really loved the story. Would like to see more.
That was so...
CUTE!!!
Interesting beginning
Well it was short and sweet, but left me wanting to read more. I hope you revisit this and develop more chapters in this story. Let me know if you do!
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