Superlatives aside, you plucked my heartstrings as smoothly as your mandolin! Thank you.
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Anonymous07/08/12
just one thing
that slightly rubbed me the wrong way..............was that she agreed to have a child now.....i know when her husband asked it was too soon...........and also he was an asshole for cheating but i can't help but feel she didnt try harder for her marriage.....i m sorry its just how i feel......hate when a marriage fails........i guess her feelings toward wiley BEFORE her divorce also made me uncomfortable.although the husband made it easy by cheating but.........anyway nice storyline good development.....and scope for more
Now, after reading the previous chapter, I said you wouldn't need to continue because if you had stopped there, the story would be just fine. We all knew Moira and Wiley would be alright BUT that changed now, and I'm officially joining the chorus for more! So, please, more, more, more!
You hit all the buttons. Yeah, I see a missed spelling or period here and there and some idiot may complain about what they think is an inconsistency, but your story (pardon the pun) rocks!
I don't know why it isn't more well read, ie more people read it, because I think this story has risen to the top.
You just keep telling your story, as musically and emotionally detailed as you want. I like the length and don't want to see it end. You obviously have a musical back ground and reading your detail of the inner workings, about guitars or industry...it all works.
Keep it up and thanks for coming back!
Rob
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Anonymous07/08/12
Great story
I loved this tale. It was skillfully written and plucked at a multitude of emotion. Thank you!
Somehow I missed this series and have just found it. Love the story, the fleshing out of the characters and the plot line. As I said well done. The only problem I have with it is that I had to stop and wipe the tears out of my eyes, reading Ch. 5; must have got some fairy dust in them.
A truly good story, but after the previous chapters, this chapter feels kind of a bit rushed… But still good nonetheless.
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Anonymous07/08/12
Really enjoying this story
I am impressed by all the details about the guitars, cars, like the main characters and how you built their background stories... I don't like the Sandy and Sammi characters or see how Wiley could have fallen for them... I wonder if you couldn't have made them more likeable and then have them break his trust but they came off as bad news from the start.
One bit I thought was out of place was when Wiley smacks the scumbag in the nose with the guitar... in my view it might have been more effective just to leave it with him having to leave with broken knuckles and all the embarrassment they suffered, also don't see a show picking back up very smoothly after the organizer hits a patron in the face with his guitar. Really liked the story, reread the old last couple of chapters after getting Ch 5... a lot of good people in here, the step mom, the old piano teacher, etc which only makes the two principals come off as being people of good values. All the hospital-graveyard stuff is very touching! I think you are very talented and tell a wonderful story.
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Anonymous07/08/12
about fucking time
been waiting forever for this - cant wait for the next one. please don't turn her into a cunt and fuck the story up. u get a 5
Ok I'm nitpicking here, but it's true. The story needs a heavy or a counterpoint to all the professional & romantic success detailed here . I'd award this 4 stars but won't vote, so as not to bring down the average. Heretofore I've given this series full marks straight across the board.
This has been a great ride but it might be time for the skilled author to turn the page & start a new saga. I'm grateful bur satiated with this cast of characters barring any unforeseen plot twists.
If you ever wanted to read everything one author wrote, this is it. Fiction so good, you think it's all real. Hey, is it?
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Anonymous07/11/12
very much a good read!!
Obviously you are a musician or very close to the industry. I loved the story and I'm not just nit picking to be nit picking, but, it's Chet Atkins (not Adkins) and also the reference to slide guitar playing and the Allman Brothers band--Duane Allman was the slide guitarist, not Greg. Great band, by the way! 5 stars, hands down!!
I hope the scene in the hospital signals a transition, going from Kara and Erin, while moving into the future with their own child.
Meanwhile you are doing a masterful job of stirring the pot with all the meddlesome troublemakers in the background.
Will he get a new car any time soon? and what happened to the two guitars that were shipped to Sotheby's?
For at least the fourth time...one of the best on this site...thank you for letting us read and continuing to write.
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Anonymous08/15/15
05
As before I love your stories. Now as before I am going to read the last of the series.
One of the first couple I voted but did not comment. sorry.
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com
English
Wonderful writing
Now that you are to the true romance, this is becoming a wonderful, loving story. Well worth the read.
Fabulous!
Superlatives aside, you plucked my heartstrings as smoothly as your mandolin! Thank you.
just one thing
that slightly rubbed me the wrong way..............was that she agreed to have a child now.....i know when her husband asked it was too soon...........and also he was an asshole for cheating but i can't help but feel she didnt try harder for her marriage.....i m sorry its just how i feel......hate when a marriage fails........i guess her feelings toward wiley BEFORE her divorce also made me uncomfortable.although the husband made it easy by cheating but.........anyway nice storyline good development.....and scope for more
Well...
First of all, thank you for this chapter.
Now, after reading the previous chapter, I said you wouldn't need to continue because if you had stopped there, the story would be just fine. We all knew Moira and Wiley would be alright BUT that changed now, and I'm officially joining the chorus for more! So, please, more, more, more!
Fantastic
i'm ejoyed this a lot and can't wait for more
TRADING A CAR FOR A FAERIE QUEEN
and he still made out like a bandit, TK U MLJ LV NV
5, 5, 5!
You hit all the buttons. Yeah, I see a missed spelling or period here and there and some idiot may complain about what they think is an inconsistency, but your story (pardon the pun) rocks!
I don't know why it isn't more well read, ie more people read it, because I think this story has risen to the top.
You just keep telling your story, as musically and emotionally detailed as you want. I like the length and don't want to see it end. You obviously have a musical back ground and reading your detail of the inner workings, about guitars or industry...it all works.
Keep it up and thanks for coming back!
Rob
Great story
I loved this tale. It was skillfully written and plucked at a multitude of emotion. Thank you!
Well and truly done
Somehow I missed this series and have just found it. Love the story, the fleshing out of the characters and the plot line. As I said well done. The only problem I have with it is that I had to stop and wipe the tears out of my eyes, reading Ch. 5; must have got some fairy dust in them.
Thank you for the hard work.
Woodmanone
A truly good story, but after the previous chapters, this chapter feels kind of a bit rushed… But still good nonetheless.
Really enjoying this story
I am impressed by all the details about the guitars, cars, like the main characters and how you built their background stories... I don't like the Sandy and Sammi characters or see how Wiley could have fallen for them... I wonder if you couldn't have made them more likeable and then have them break his trust but they came off as bad news from the start.
One bit I thought was out of place was when Wiley smacks the scumbag in the nose with the guitar... in my view it might have been more effective just to leave it with him having to leave with broken knuckles and all the embarrassment they suffered, also don't see a show picking back up very smoothly after the organizer hits a patron in the face with his guitar. Really liked the story, reread the old last couple of chapters after getting Ch 5... a lot of good people in here, the step mom, the old piano teacher, etc which only makes the two principals come off as being people of good values. All the hospital-graveyard stuff is very touching! I think you are very talented and tell a wonderful story.
about fucking time
been waiting forever for this - cant wait for the next one. please don't turn her into a cunt and fuck the story up. u get a 5
Good Read!!!!
Very entertaining thanks for a great read.
Too much icing , not enough cake !
Ok I'm nitpicking here, but it's true. The story needs a heavy or a counterpoint to all the professional & romantic success detailed here . I'd award this 4 stars but won't vote, so as not to bring down the average. Heretofore I've given this series full marks straight across the board.
This has been a great ride but it might be time for the skilled author to turn the page & start a new saga. I'm grateful bur satiated with this cast of characters barring any unforeseen plot twists.
Another Blockbuster Hit
If you ever wanted to read everything one author wrote, this is it. Fiction so good, you think it's all real. Hey, is it?
very much a good read!!
Obviously you are a musician or very close to the industry. I loved the story and I'm not just nit picking to be nit picking, but, it's Chet Atkins (not Adkins) and also the reference to slide guitar playing and the Allman Brothers band--Duane Allman was the slide guitarist, not Greg. Great band, by the way! 5 stars, hands down!!
thanks
that was a great story!
No shit -
Too much moisture to read all this -
Really good work and a joy to read -
Astounding, Simply Astounding.
Just when I think this series can't get any better...
Somehow I don't expect to have tears from a story on Lit but there it is. Three in a row.
you just keep tugging at the heartstrings
I hope the scene in the hospital signals a transition, going from Kara and Erin, while moving into the future with their own child.
Meanwhile you are doing a masterful job of stirring the pot with all the meddlesome troublemakers in the background.
Will he get a new car any time soon? and what happened to the two guitars that were shipped to Sotheby's?
Just Read This
For at least the fourth time...one of the best on this site...thank you for letting us read and continuing to write.
05
As before I love your stories. Now as before I am going to read the last of the series.
One of the first couple I voted but did not comment. sorry.
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com
So much love
I cannot wait to make this a permanent part of my personal library, thank you for sharing your heart.
Jason
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