All Comments on 'But Not Yet...'

That was so fucking hotttttt. I nearly came when she did. More please :)

Very erotic well written story.

Your Bio mentions your website - but the URL is not listed.

Continuous buildup for me, just as it was for her!

I had previously added my website on the profile page and I thought it'd show up there, but I can't seem to see it - so I've added a url to the bottom of my profile description :)

It's a "5". Pacing, imagery, visuals, are all there. An erotic tale nicely written.

It's well written, teasing, sexy, and altogether a good read. I just might do a roleplay of this with my girlfriend. Nice job! Panties off to you! :)

You are amazingly good. I don't normally read Lesbian stories, but I did so because I read your subsequent story, and I appreciate good writing. This story built to a climax [not quite Ravel's Bolaro] at just the right pace. Extermely descriptive.

I've been perusing Literotica for a few years now and this is definitely one of my favourites. It's SUPER sexy and I may well also try it out with my girlfriend....

done, rebecca_mcpherson. Transparent mechanics let me fully immerse myself in your tantalysingly fantastic descriptions. Ohhhh, the way she teased... the way you described the narration -not just telling us what she said and what she did. And the tension she built up in her lover through her touching words and wordless touches... it made me yearn almost as her lover yearned. Mmmm. This was a good one. Thanks.

Love the suspense, so hott

Enjoyed your story so much, I felt like the blindfolded girl in the story, came at same time she did.