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by tazz31705/13/12

AND OCCASIONALLY INSIDE OF ME

to further the species and tidal lines. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by njoyjade05/19/12

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Tazz317 correctly suggests that “to further the species” it is important to be inside.
Here the words “take” and “remain” represent interior regions.
Oceanic tides vary according to lunar month and weather, but are unbounded.
Enlightenment and passion have no boundaries if we listen with our heart.

Thank you tazz317 for your view.

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