All Comments on 'Mommy: Becoming My Daughter's Slut'

Throughly enjoy your writing...

If you have a day job, quit......

Loved your story an I hope you will write more about them an maybe involve chloe. I only gave it five stars when I wished I could have given more.

Great story, please make many more chapters of this story.......please!

Can't wait to read it again.

As always, another fantastic story. You have to keep this story going so we can see what the daughter has in store for mommy!

"But the mother and child reunion/Is only a motion away." Silk, you've done it again. Another hot, filthy, perverted story from a master of the craft.

I really hope there is more

Wow that was incredibly arousing.

I want the same thing at my house only I want to control both mom and stepdad like here. I get so wet thinking about seducing one then the other, and making them both serve me. I'm stacy18_bi@hotmail.com

Like to see both subs joined together in submission for their Mistress in the second of many chapters to follow.......

Great story and cant wait for part 2 hopefully this will come soon

Its something we all have at least thought about but are too scared to try....keep it coming.

More more and more please. Your story is hot. I can't wait the training to start.

Good build-up. Would be better now if the daughter takes control and pushes the boundaries to include others in the game, making her mom submit even more.

Would like to see some good BDSM themes to it to add more flavor to it.

Looking forward to it.

neulas@yahoo.com

Thanks, Jasmine, for another hot erotic fantasy.

Like other respondents I hope there wil be more chapters to cum!

loved your story i hope you keep this one going, very hot.

Thank you so much for the story and for all of your stories. I do hope you continue this story, I want to see how this relationship between a dominant Daughter Mistress and her slave mommy develops. Such an exciting, arousing taboo fantasy.....

You have outdone yourself again...

Awesome story. Really, really hope you continue it and that the daughter ends up using her strap-on to butt fuck her Mommy-slut.

All your stories are great, keep up the good work.

you have made another great story arch. i can't wait until you continue this story.

I cant wait for the next chapter and hope the story develops with mommy being part of the harem

Please continue this as soon as possible. This story was amazing, I can't wait to read more.

Please add the second part

...perspectives next time!! you've done this with a son already, now do it with the daughter!

She had been using vibrating eggs for years at her husband's command, but near the the end it said "what I later learn is called a vibrating egg".

Also, Evelyn is reluctant to start swearing in her daughter's presence even though she had earlier said "cunt" with no hesitation.

Well that's only two, but still.

Oh right... This is a literotica and I've completely missed the point.

I can't wait for Mommy to get fucked up the ass. I can't wait for the training, either. This is really, really good.

I would love to see a second story, keep up the great work!

please make the sequel it left me incomplete

I've read some of ur stories, all great but this one is even better, such an amazing story, I absolutely loved the build up, every word. U have to pls make the sequel, am interested to see where it goes, see if Kaylee maybe brings over some of her other pets to play with her Mom... ;)

Loved the build-up as the daughter gradually starts treating Evelyn as her personal servant.

Do you know when or if there will be a sequel to "Mommy: Becoming My Daughter's Slut?

Have started it...but stuck on plot that works...

pretty close to being a masterpiece! i love the gradual progression of the mother's sexual behavior. the subtle manipulation of the daughter. excellent.

There has to be more... I am interested to see where it goes... Does her daughter Mistress Kaylee bring other pets like Chloe and maybe her friends to play with her slut pet Mom... ;)

This story is just as good the 2nd time as it was the first. I especially loved the online mistress; she made the story. She added the necessary element to allow the straight mother to seduce (reverse seduce? Is that a thing?) her daughter in a believable way. She allowed the mother to be innocent, which in large part is what made her eventually submission so delicious.

In particular, you pulled off the messaging masterfully. I often want to skip those parts, but you did a wonderful job of using it to drive the story without weighing it down. The messages were short, which both prevented it from hurting the story as well as made it believable; few IMs are wordy.

In addition, you used the online mistress to guide her, and when you didn't need her, you let her go. A lot of authors seem to think that they need to have the mistress turn up in the story (gasp! It's her neighbor!), because [I guess they feel] every character needs to have sex. That would have been particularly prickly in this story because you had the mistress be an established character (a choice I admire; you didn't have to explain how a straight woman found herself an online mistress. You established her credentials as a submissive, and presumably she went online to satisfy herself after her husband left - died? - but had no intention of meeting with the person, so the gender wasn't important) but even without that, it's a device rarely pulled off successfully.

I've mentioned before that I am neutral on incest; I lean against it. It seems to be one of your top fantasies and yet you are one of my favorite authors; I think that speaks even more highly of your ability to write erotica. It's a lot easier to attract readers that share your kinks.

That being said, I - like most readers of erotica, I assume - greatly enjoy taboo sex. Role reversal make every story hotter, and you seem to agree: secretary seducing boss, student seducing teacher, some element of that is in almost all of your stories. Had this story been about a mother dominating a daughter, it would have neither detracted nor added to my personal enjoyment of the story. It being a mother submitting, however, adds not only the role reversal, but the taboo of incest as well. Incredibly hot. (That's the kind of incest I like; it's not necessarily the act itself that turns me on submission/role reversal that I enjoy. The incest is merely a vehicle for that, in my mind, but is extremely effective, particularly when handled by one as talented as you.)

I have read a lot of your stories ma'am, but this is the best of them all. I have lost count on how many times i must have shagged to this :P

I sincerely wish that you would continue this story asap

I make me so hot thank about this

there is so much more to do. Your imagination (and undoubted experiences) should let you make so many of us go over the edge in the possibilities of expanding this wonderful and loving circle of lust, passion, and unspeakable pleasures.

This can win you an award!

Oh my goodness,you are on talented and sexy writer. This is simply amazing x

I am looking for an online mistress I want to be dominated by a girl or boy email me at foshosarah@gmail.com if you interested or to tell me that I. Am gross slut

Ashamed of how much this turned me on. Incredible story.

Am as horny as fuck reading this story cant wait for the next part

My Mom has been my slut bitch since I was 15 years old I am now 27 years old and she is still my Submissive slut. My slut enjoys the spankings, the blindfold, the handcuffs. She also loves the golden showers, that came about by accident the very first time, she was eating my pussy and sucking my clit and I just couldn't stop myself from weeing, but mom loved it, she even drank it and it was a real turn on for both of us. We now always end our sessions with mom drinking my piss from the source!

Thank you so much for your story It just like me and my mom...

Caroline X

Omg I so wish I knew u both or "family dinamic" intreegs me so much jus to b a spectater in or home would b so amazing

Hi Jasmine. I am slowly working my way through all your stories in alphabetical order, well the ones that involve female dominant anyway, and my one criticism is constantly that so many of Your stories follow a similar path. But in this instance the reverse seduction and the way you tell it from the point of view of an online relationship is very clever. I loved it!

your stories are so finger fucking hot, keep me cumming so hard all rhe time

Another great start for a series,Jasmine. Always excited by your seductions and clever manipulations of personalities. On occassion I would love to see a seduction that didn't involeve 18 year olds. Perhaps a few more mature women and no teenagers.

Can not wait to see what training the daughter has in mind for her slut mommy

Dear Jasmine, Each of your stories that I read is better then the last. Thank you for this wonderful and unusual tale. I would never dare to tell you what you should write next, as each story follows in its own way and at its own time. I used to be writer myself and would be happy to assist you in your excellent work.

I can never thank you enough,

John

j2c2b2@hotmail.com

Definitely like to read more and more including her serving with the other's her daughter owns!

This is such a great story, love the way it unfolds and everyone gets what they really want; including us the readers.

Love this story. The becoming of a daughters sub. The unfolding the process. The deliberate step by step made this story incredible great!!!

One of favourite writers and favourite stories. Please write more! This story never fails to get me excited

great beginning

love how mom slowly turned the power structure without her daughter catching on too soon. I agree that if the mom went to the daughter right away and begged to be her mommy slut it may have freaked her out. slow and steady wins the race.

I enjoyed it, thank you

Great story I’m desperate for part 2

you wrote it you live it before

Love the story!!!! Wish I could date the mother and be a slave with her to the daughter. To have the two of us worship and serve the daughter while I also become submissive to the mother. What a dream!!

I love stories when young girls take control of their MILF.

I've been on the site for a long time, but have never read a more erotic story. The way that you deal with the psychological elements of the situation is so real, I cannot believe that you are not writing a book of this story. You have a git for erotica that is stunning! you are my favorite author on this site, and any where else you plan to publish, Please create a book from this story, perhaps making Mommy a sub of Chloe?

I am only sorry that 5 is the highest rating

Awesome. This just ended. Bummer

377. You write a lot of similar stories where a person is subjected to another, but it is unusual for a mom to try to subject herself to a daughter. Good idea. Can it last? Can we get a man in the mix?

I can’t recall how many times I fingered myself to completion reading this. Once finished I retrieved my dildo and headed to the massage chair. I came again with anal dildo sex!

I first read this many years ago. It was my favourite story then and it is now. Shame there wasn't a whole series with lots of chapters. Still a great read all these years later

Love this I fantasize about my mom often and this makes them even hotter for me!

Always loved this story! Really like the sorta slow build up, it could have been an even longer build up, and I love the dom daughter sub mom aspect! Wish it could continue and evolve.

OMG.. I didn't make it to 10..