Holy shit, that's cheesy... Anyway: Loved the story line and how he gave himself up. However.. Not sure this is considered incest... If you were going for Taboo it works though :) Maybe have her flashback to the sex scene so we have more to fantasize about..? 5 star rating!!
Thank you Scotsman69! I've noticed your comments on several of my offerings and so I've been reading your stories as well. In my opinion, they're among the best here on Lit, so that a compliment from you really means something to me! I'm overwhelmed.
English
Boring!
Boring!
Cinners Unite!!
Holy shit, that's cheesy... Anyway: Loved the story line and how he gave himself up. However.. Not sure this is considered incest... If you were going for Taboo it works though :) Maybe have her flashback to the sex scene so we have more to fantasize about..? 5 star rating!!
Taboo
Yes, I was going for taboo. Thanks for the rating. :)
Lovely twist at the end
Very well done
Thank you!
Thank you Eric! I appreciate your support! :kiss: (((HUG)))
Breathtaking tale.
There are wee imperfections in the writing, but your brio carries it through. How lovely to find such quality on Lit again. Thank you.
Thank you!
Thank you Scotsman69! I've noticed your comments on several of my offerings and so I've been reading your stories as well. In my opinion, they're among the best here on Lit, so that a compliment from you really means something to me! I'm overwhelmed.
(((HUGS)))
- Cin
Not good
Very non descriptive and boring.
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