All Comments on 'Date with Destiny-Demon Style Ch. 10'

That was the best story I have read and I loved it thank you for

Writing and sharing it with us thank u again

Thank you for the journey. This has been a really fun story to read. From being forced into something you don't want, finding your mother isn't really your mother, being told you are to marry Satan, waking up dead, discovering you have the power to beat Satan at his own game and in the end get everything you want!!! Yea not a bad story at all. I look forward to your next story.....

Yay!!! love da story one of my favorites yay!!!!!!

i love this series. it good to see you took the advice of the readers and chose darien. but nevertheless your writing style i like and i will love to see your hand in another story

I am glad she married Darian. This was a lovely story! I was worried about Lucifer, yuck! Four lovers, can't complain. Great job! Thank you for finishing the story!

you are setting up the next story with a good twist, i think ugly guy is going to turn out not so ugly, hope to the next story soon

I like the way that Kara stood up to Lucifer and gained the husband and lovers that she desired. She was a great character, full of hidden strength. I wonder how Lucifer will screw with this next girl.

I liked the story very much. You've done a good job at mixing action and sex into one story. The 'but' I have related to the story is that I would've liked to see her married to Ladrian. Then again, that's my personal preference and from what I've seen the majority liked Darian. Good story! Thank you for taking the time to write it

I loved it!!!!

I totally love all of your series even though I read it backwards (Michelle-Kara's) I loved how the main characters were independent and witty. and I love your weird sense of humor!

I liked the character and enjoyed the story. The plotline was on the thin side though, things were just odd. For example, the crazy bitch sends guards to capture Lucifer, he breaks out, she's surprised to see him in the throne hall and starts fighting. During the fight Lucifer is completely free to interfere with Malnos when he helps his mother but he doesn't do anything when he wants to kill the princes? The entire coup just seemed thin to me, no offence, but if you want to do something more with this story and setting, you'll have to beef up the storyline. Characterbuilding was nice, I like what you've with your people.

The King's Cross scene? I dunno ._.

THIS IS AMAZINGLY WRITTEN AND I FORBID YOU TO EVER STOP

I NEED MORE

WHY ARE YOU SUCH A GOOD WRITER

GAH

Loved the entire series! Very well written. With minor edits it would've been flawless. You should consider taking it offline, fleshing it out (more planning into the fights towards the end for sure), and getting published =)

loved the series, but my only critique would be that there just needs to be some more saucy scenes, at the end where you mention when darian would have her whipped, you should have written that scene! but other than that, an amazing series! absolutly love!!

I loved all of your stories...more than any other story on this whole site! You should look into getting published..and I mean that seriously. I'd read whatever you'd pit out. Bravo

I seriously thought with that cliffhanger where she didn't call on lucifer at the end of the chapter... Well, you got me. ;-) Fantastic. Unpredictable and wow! You should publish this on Amazon and make some money. It's that good!

Im grateful I came across this story after it was finished. I would have died waiting. You have talent.

Decent story despite lack of editing/proofreading and some areas in the plot that needed much more thought. One thing though, I swear you overused the whole "ah! there she is!" line, shit that got annoying after about the 4th time. It seemed like it was half of Lucifer's dialog in the beginning, and even Emiline used it, just got old fast. Thanks for the story in any case.

And it's just as good as the first.

Love this story! So sad it's completed!

I don't know I wasn't really satisfied that she married darian I kinda wished she just sent him home from the beginning to say he just bit her, no he freaking sexually assaulted her on their first night. In my opinion Ladrian was perfect for her. Lucifer I don't know I wasn't feeling him this whole story because of how weak he is. Like he really needs a 18 year old girl to save him. Pathetic. And just letting her push him around like that he's no alpha male at all.

Uhh... I read your 3 stories in the wrong order (backwards) and I have to say that after reading Lucifer's love story first, he seems like such a wimp in this story. Where are his powers? Why is he not using magic? It's embarrassing that he's constantly being overpowered and chained up by small groups of lower demons. Even if I hadn't read the other stories, it's baffling that Lucifer is so weak. It's not a believable characterization of the ruler of hell.

Wishing there was a follow up story for the princesses, also thanks for these stories.

I agree. I would love to see branch off stories but you killed it when you said females are not really available which killed it. Great story though