Thank you for all who stayed with me on this one. It was an enjoyable write and I thank you all that took the time to comment. It really is much appreciated. A special thank you to Estragon who edited this story and made it a much better read.
With respect
DG
Well done DG, well done. There is nothing more to say, except it made me smile.
Thank you!
M1
PS estragon, good editing too! I know how important a good editor is. I am grateful for SoCalOvid. The unsung heroes!
Nice to read a story that is about a woman who decides she loves a man and stays faithful to him for life. Well written as always and thanks for the prompt postings, which makes it ever so much easier to follow the story.
DG Hear, I loved every bit of this story. Keep up the great work!! You nearly made me, a grown man, cry.
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Anonymous05/18/12
Grammar
Lovely story, but, D.G. Hear, you're too good a writer to be writing a sentence that reads "there must be someone who ... matched Vicky and I together." I know that the objective case of personal pronouns has a generally tough time on this list, but when the error pops up on what should be a very poignant sentiment, it's like a grain of sand in the eye of the otherwise wholly absorbed reader. In short, that "someone" matched "Vicky and me together." Try it out.
Excellent romantic story, 5 stars. If I had writen this story I would have put the wedding , when the youngest child would have been 5 years old. That scen would have been same romantic, as this was, but it does not matter for me. DG Hear's writing skill is without big waves, his level and quality is continously straight.
As I sit here practically drowning in tears, I conclude that I enjoyed it. Marlene really did a job on him. When she moved off the stage everyone was "great folks"!
Thank you DG!
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Anonymous05/18/12
nice love story
i liked it . is was a good romantic story. the way the author made vicky into the perfect women. why wait till he was 65 to marry. she could have still married him and givin him a pre nut so the money part would not reflect the reason for the union..
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Anonymous05/18/12
Outstanding Story
Thanks!!!!
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Anonymous05/18/12
just when...
Just when I think you couldn't top your last story you do it again. I don't know how you do it but please don't stop.
I laughed out loud at the mother's comment to the father at the wedding and did it again when he told why he didn't wait. So real and just like an old couple who are still together at 90 years of age.
The song you included brought back "Precious Memories" from my youth too. I can still see and hear the choir (mostly my country folk neighbors) singing it in my mind.. To quote a famous comedian "Thanks for the Memories".
DG has long been one of my favorite authors. This story certainly demonstrates why. It is definitely one of the finest love stories ever posted on this site.
...what an absolutely fantastic piece of work. You are definitely my favorite author and never fail to move me. Please keep up the great work because there are so many of us who wait on pins and needles for your next offering. Thanks for what you do.
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Anonymous06/08/12
This is a wonderful story
D. G. ,
You are the best--when I feel down or something, I can always depend on one of your stories to make me feel better
Thanks always,
Sam
English
Great Ending
This was a great story to read and copy edit. DG Hear is truly Master of Feel Good.
Fabulous Story!
Thank You DGHear for one of your best and as always fantastic storys.
Worth Waitiing
Great story - the end was worth waiting for - thank you for not taking to much time between each part.
DG Hear
Thank you for all who stayed with me on this one. It was an enjoyable write and I thank you all that took the time to comment. It really is much appreciated. A special thank you to Estragon who edited this story and made it a much better read.
With respect
DG
Masterful
Well done DG, well done. There is nothing more to say, except it made me smile.
Thank you!
M1
PS estragon, good editing too! I know how important a good editor is. I am grateful for SoCalOvid. The unsung heroes!
Excellent Romance!
Ending brought tears to my eyes. Well written; well edited. Well done!
Nice to read a story that is about a woman who decides she loves a man and stays faithful to him for life. Well written as always and thanks for the prompt postings, which makes it ever so much easier to follow the story.
Excellent
DG Hear, I loved every bit of this story. Keep up the great work!! You nearly made me, a grown man, cry.
Grammar
Lovely story, but, D.G. Hear, you're too good a writer to be writing a sentence that reads "there must be someone who ... matched Vicky and I together." I know that the objective case of personal pronouns has a generally tough time on this list, but when the error pops up on what should be a very poignant sentiment, it's like a grain of sand in the eye of the otherwise wholly absorbed reader. In short, that "someone" matched "Vicky and me together." Try it out.
REFLECTIONS IN BROKEN GLASS
to some it all looks the same, TK U MLJ LV NV
Thank you
Excellent romantic story, 5 stars. If I had writen this story I would have put the wedding , when the youngest child would have been 5 years old. That scen would have been same romantic, as this was, but it does not matter for me. DG Hear's writing skill is without big waves, his level and quality is continously straight.
Fine Romance
As I sit here practically drowning in tears, I conclude that I enjoyed it. Marlene really did a job on him. When she moved off the stage everyone was "great folks"!
Thank you DG!
nice love story
i liked it . is was a good romantic story. the way the author made vicky into the perfect women. why wait till he was 65 to marry. she could have still married him and givin him a pre nut so the money part would not reflect the reason for the union..
Outstanding Story
Thanks!!!!
just when...
Just when I think you couldn't top your last story you do it again. I don't know how you do it but please don't stop.
Great Story
I really enjoyed this one. Thanks for a great story
Excellent
As usual DGH you did it again. A fine story well told.
Emotional
I laughed out loud at the mother's comment to the father at the wedding and did it again when he told why he didn't wait. So real and just like an old couple who are still together at 90 years of age.
The rest I mostly cried.
Excellent
Another great read DG. As long as you want to keep writing them, I'll enjoy reading them! Thanks!
Great..
I've read them all and enjoyed every single moment. Thank you.
A heartwarming story............
The song you included brought back "Precious Memories" from my youth too. I can still see and hear the choir (mostly my country folk neighbors) singing it in my mind.. To quote a famous comedian "Thanks for the Memories".
WHAT A FINE STORY!
DG has long been one of my favorite authors. This story certainly demonstrates why. It is definitely one of the finest love stories ever posted on this site.
What A Great Romance & Love Story
I wanna be rich and marry a super model when I grow up.
Well, you did it again...
...what an absolutely fantastic piece of work. You are definitely my favorite author and never fail to move me. Please keep up the great work because there are so many of us who wait on pins and needles for your next offering. Thanks for what you do.
This is a wonderful story
D. G. ,
You are the best--when I feel down or something, I can always depend on one of your stories to make me feel better
Thanks always,
Sam
Great Read
Thank you for all the time and effort to create this wonderful story. I enjoyed it to the fullest and look forward to the rest of your stories.
red hair
What? I cant believe she didnt have red hair.
absolutely brilliant story
loved it from beginning to end...what a great love story....and the end really surprised me...fantastic....
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