I enjoyed this enormously and I hope you might rediscover your Muse - or find a new one - to help you continue this excellent piece of work. It would be a shame to leave, at this point, a story with so much potential. Perhaps five stars might help to bring back the magic that is so evident in your work so far.
Thank you, and please have the five stars I mentioned!
English
A fine story.
I enjoyed this enormously and I hope you might rediscover your Muse - or find a new one - to help you continue this excellent piece of work. It would be a shame to leave, at this point, a story with so much potential. Perhaps five stars might help to bring back the magic that is so evident in your work so far.
Thank you, and please have the five stars I mentioned!
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