Story needs to be longer especally the creampie part,story is almost a copy of experements between me & my wife.
I loved it. I do agree it needed to be longer though.
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Pretty good!!!
Story needs to be longer especally the creampie part,story is almost a copy of experements between me & my wife.
great submission
I loved it. I do agree it needed to be longer though.
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