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The Summer of '99

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by newoldcentury05/17/12

thoughtful...

wistful, sad...yeah that is life

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by tazz31705/17/12

IS IT POSSIBLE FOR A CORPSE TO THINK

and if so what would it be, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Maria239405/18/12

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There might be a few places it could be tweaked, but what the hell, it brought tears to my eyes. You did an excellent job on this poem. To me, poetry should convey emotion and when it is over edited to the point that it becomes sterile, it loses its poetic essence. This is a wonderful piece. I know the feeling of such a loss and you captured it, perfectly.

~ maria

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