My Perfect Woman

JPB Is Noire 2 The Bone !

The Seinfeld motto was " no hugging, no learning " . Well substitute Copious F----g for the first half of that maxim & you have this story distilled to it's spooey based essence. It was a fine read - this reminded me of Raymond Chandler except R.C. never dealt with computers heistedj from wifey.

Still a WACC

Bit that's expected from JPB. WImp Ass Castrated Cuckolds UNITE under JPB

I liked it.

Sometimes "What he hell." fits perfectly. Pretty good yarn,
Thanks,
MGM

Never again

I wouldn't fuck my whoring ass slut ex wife again with my dogs dick!

Good Revenge Story

If people could read it without remembering other stories by JPB!

Amusing digiting error,,,, I think!

"No stings attached?"

"No strings."

Good one JPB

Thanks for the entertainment. Enjoyed your story.Mike from Texas.

can't stay married to the whore

but you can leave $50 buck on the night stand and use a condom

Though I liked it

I felt it incomplete. The revenge on his ex does not last until the end of the story. And there is no revenge on his ex friend as he keeps fucking Franny a secret. Still I gave this *****. Well written as always and your stories are so good they deserve higher than we can rate them.
ToS2/1Tm

EVEN THE ANNIVERSAY HORIZONTAL BOP WALTZ

shouldnt be another brick for a wall banger, TK U MLJ LV NV

Like most of your stories...

...I felt unsatisified with most of the content, although some of it did have possibilities, and, of course, the ending sucked all to high hell. What amazes me most is how you can stay consistently at the top of the popular author's list. I guess there's no accounting for taste.

Almost

It was an overwhelming 5* until Shelly came back at the end. It just did not fit his agenda -- he was looking for a future wife, not a past one. Great yarn up until that ending.

Realistically, he should have been worrying about STD's, and how he escaped it up until then was a mystery.

Your well-told stories often have a quirky ending, but this one is too much, even for you.

Bob writes well, but rarely finishes his stories.

In this one he drops the whole revenge theme and never finishes it. We never find out what Shelley is feeling. Has she learned anything? Or is she just sad her husband found out, but not that she screwed around? We'll never know.

Fair

I understand the punishing of his friend for screwing his wife but Rob let the cunt leave without enough revenge. Could have been a better tale.

Back In Your Groove

I hope your through experimenting with the wierd

What a waste of time

Started fine, developed well, fizzled out and ended nowhere. What a waste of time.

so if ROB (Just Plains Bob) decides to take her back Even if its just for sex

then WHY does ROB ( JPB) get upset in the 1st place?

none of this makes any sense at all. Its like it was written by mental retard .

It is not joke!!!!!!!!!!

Just Plain Bob had a comment circa in 2005, where (it is not joke) he complained about the short without epiloge story. The old Hungarian way of saying Owl says sparrow you are big headed...................

Stop fucking writing already you sad fuck....

....you've cooked up every plot down to the charred pitted bones and there is nothing left.End this nightmare.

No answer for 'liar' charge

Sweety's response to his charge she was screwing guys while he was golfing was never provided (maybe not to him, certainly not to the readers)! Her defense of nymphomania was a weak defense. His counter-charge of 'strange' sex while he was in town gutted her defense. How can he accept her back as a fuck-buddy - even once? Very good read...thanks! 4*

Somebody Tripped!!!***

And fell OUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A Shotgun Story

This story is all over the place there are starts here, start there and none of them get finished what the hell is going on with it? It feels like you had three stories in mind and just but them all together here in one

She's The Engine That Makes This Story Go, But..

We know nothing about her! The story falls short because we don't know why she cheats...nymphomania is just a clinical name for slut. If we had any idea what REALLY led her to be unfaithful, this story could really hum.

Hey Harry and Pistol Pete and RePhil!

Shut the fuck up!
Nobody cares for your meaningless opinions.
It's one thing to say you don't like the story and to give advice on how to make it better.

But to attack the authors; who are your betters by the way, is over the top.
You should look at comments from someone; actually pretty much anyone else that has commented and maybe you would learn something.
Several others, including me found things they did not like about the story but they found a way to give decent feedback to the author.

Of course you need half a brain to be able to do that.
The three of you can barely write a sentence.
What makes you think that anyone cares that you don't like the author.

This genre has always been tough but it used to have a lot of good authors writing and now you can barely find a story, let alone a good one. But then why would anyone want to write for morons like you!

gave u a 5

but cant figure out why he would fuck her again after knowing she was fucking everything with a dick and maybe a few without - god only knows what disease she carries between her legs. and when a cheating slut she ways they wore a rubber - did she mke them ware one when she sucked them off?

good again

Well written tight story. Crazy at the end, but NSA she might be a Craig's List Girl...but for the love of God don't be surprised if she comes with an STD

Handbook for sluts: Use condom!

bobby the wimp into male humiliation is back - how hopeless and shallow

where you been sick one?

Anybody can write this sick crap but you waste your talent doing so. So I must conclude you are into self cucking helpless male humiliation. How sad.

JPB is such a good writer and at times writes great stories.

Therefore, it annoys me that he would waste his talent and write this.

A high risk first step?

Well OK that was an understatement -

FWB maybe with lot's of caution and protection at all times - sex is sex and she was good at that -

BUT "Danger Will Robinson, Danger"

The burn will really hurt -

Not really satisfying

and extremely dangerous...I had expected a little bit more brain and moral strength; iin the end Rob just proved he lived along with the same low moralty standards as his ex-wife. First two pages were nice to read!

CAREFUL NOW...STRINGS CAN BE BRAIDED

into a noose or lasso, TK U MLJ LV NV

All too true....

Loved the story (as I love all of your stories one way or another), and it's all too true, there is no such thing as a "perfect woman." I felt terribly frustrated for the man. His wife sounded perfect in every way, except.....and their relationship seemed perfect, except..... I'm glad he didn't turn out to be one of those guys who just accepted that his wife was going to be a slut and stayed married to her, I just can't relate to someone like that, the pain of knowing she'd be with someone else would eventually destroy the man. But he's human enough to know he loved everything else about her, including the sex. There just isn't a "right" answer. Just like real life, nothing is ever perfect, especially relationships.

Big mistake

Why, all of a sudden, have JPB male characters turned into dumb asses?

No strings?

What about every social disease known to man? What if she's trying to trap you and get pregnant? SO many strings - SO many other women out there.

amazing

It's your MO to take a fairly decent story and trash it in the last few paragraphs. Four goes to two

2 Stars For The Unsatisfying Ending

What happened to revenge on Chuck?

What happened to revenge for her lying?

Why no discussion of what she would say if she found out HE fucked around on his trips? Because you KNOW she would cut off his balls if he had, and no excuse of "blue balls" would get HIM off the hook!

ditto what KarenE said

** asshole.