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Miranda and Geraldine Ch. 08

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by Anonymous06/06/12

Loosing focus...

You really should have stayed with the main storyline here. Yes, there is material here that could be used later, but not now, or perhaps this is from another story and you're mixing and matching. Whatever the case, it broke the flow. All that said, I'm looking forward to seeing what Janet does with her new purchases.

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