Toymaker Ch. 03

Quite a mix

This is a dark story about the dark sexual needs and activities humanity is capable of. I enjoyed all 3 chapters and would enjoy more of the Toymaker's adventures. The main character as he is portrayed after the lab accident needs women to subjugate and take to dark places sexually. The only real criticism I have is in chap 2 when he is doing the word association activity with Marjory. It was a bit tedious and, at least to Me, overly long.

Keep up the good work.

I get that he is a villain, I like it a lot. It didn't make sense to me why he didn't keep Marjorie because of the morals of not taking her life away, but then seemed fine letting Angela be pretty much a slave with no owner. Perhaps I missed that progression of character but I didn't see anything that caused it. Delete this if it's dumb.

It would be appropriate if...

...Angela came back later and killed him. But she won't. Not with this perverse hypocritical nonsense in your head in which men like this are bad,but not really because women want it. And Nietzche? Sweetie, it obvious you've only got a passing familiarity at best.