All Comments on 'Down by the Lake Ch. 12'

What a fantastic serial. At no stage did it feel any less than the real experiences of free but committed people, told by a master story-teller.

Great series really enjoyed it. Few spelling erros :) butoverall a perfect 5

Hope you have another series to write

55 male USA

What a fun story. I like the way it unfolded and the various topics that came up. The Poly lifestyle is wonderful. Keep up the great work

Reading this set I was put in mind of the song ".......I get a peaceful easy feeling...."

The world needs more good feelings.

I want to try this lifestyle. Actually, to think on a macro level, I want this lifestyle to dominate American society. Thanks for sharing your gift with me.

I read your story Jessica then I saw Down by the lake so glad I did. Great series very entertaining and enjoyable. As I said before. THANKS FOR SHARING!!!!

Good Story but is CH.12 the last one????

You did such a magnificent job with the whole story. If it is real I am so happy for all. If it is fiction then by all means you showed that love is boundless. All through reading it I had many emotions that came out and not one was negative. You did a great job presenting it and putting the finishing touches at the end. I am very happy to have read it and thank you very much for putting it out there.

A great story. Just want to add my opinion in this. Interesting characters and great story line. Very impressed on how you moved the story. Looking forward to reading more of your stories. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Fantastic! Which is to say, its all a fantasy. Evolution is driven by reality and results. There's a reason long term emotional/sexual relationships have been mostly monogamous for most of civilization. Enjoy your fantasies, what have you got to lose? Thanks for the effort.

Beautiful, wonderful story.

Beautiful relationships, well revealed. Great story line with good character development. This is the first time I've seen Rimmer and Heinlein referenced in a Literotica story; the ideas were well used. I wish real life worked that well and that smoothly. 5 Star effort!