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Great Start
Can't wait to read more.
Very interesting
Longer chapters please : )
Nice Start
you have left me eager for chapter 2 because I want to know more....
You almost lost me in the first few paragraphs, but I'm thankful I held on! I am hooked on your story! Anticipating the next chapter : ) Great job. I'm hoping for a demon/angel/human lovefest. Write more soon!
oh yes
yes hopefully we have a menage story line here. I love menage stories, and I am currently writing on now. Good job btw, hope to see the next chapter soon.
Love Triangle
I for one like a good menage story but I hope that doesn't happen here, since apparently angels and demons can't stand each other. But who knows what the author has in store for us. It is a great start and I hope you and continue and finish the story.
Interesting take on the love triangle with a demon, angel and human.
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