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by Anonymous

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by cantbuymy05/21/12

a very naughty wife

and i bet she will still be naughty over and over again.5

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by Pultoy05/21/12

Command

You have an excellent command of the language You did a fine job of setting the scene, executing the emotion, and teasing the reader.

My compliments. Thank you for writing.

Regards,
-Pultoy

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by chytown05/21/12

Thanks***

For the read.

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by Lickideesplit05/22/12

work suffers, marriage flourishes

This should be required reading (repeat every anniversary) for all married men!!!
Wish I had read this umpteen years ago, when my marriage was young and my work burdens were increasing!

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by BTTap05/22/12

Really good smut.

Thanks for the read.

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by Anonymous05/23/12

Well done

I loved this--a simple story well told is a wonderful thing, and you've done exactly that. I love the characters (likable, developed but not overly so), plot pacing, and descriptions. It was fun to read, and as an aside thanks for not ruining it with my personal pet peeve: descriptions that sound like missing persons reports for Barbie dolls (she was 5' 9", 110lbs, 36DD)

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by phil221303/15/13

great naughty girl spanking story

Sometimes punishment can be so good. Great story!

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by pjhale12109/25/13

Great story

This is a theme that I really enjoy -- loving relationship with willing submission because it feeds both their desires. Hot!

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by Old5101/27/14

Great Story!

Keep writing!

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by rightbank11/06/14

and that, folks, is why you always back up your files

but, I am willing to speculate there is an archival copy somewhere. and it sounds like these two have played these roles before.

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