A Cousin Encounter Ch. 02

more please

can you write more of this ,, like a 3,4,5?

to short

way to short and rushed this should have been twice as long to get to the same place. don't just write the minimum of words build the characters and plot up. this seemed rushed a lot left unsaid between the last chapter and this one. try reading some of the how to articles and use a free editor to help you fill it in.

Need more chapters

You need to continue this story, now that you have me. Thanks

What a nice story ! You must write another chapter or two; we need to see where they go from here. Thank you !

so-so

way to short and you left a large hole between this chapter and the last plus this one was way to rushed. i agree with the one that said you need to spread it out more and that it needs to be two or three times longer to get to the same place. you also TOTALLY FAILED TO FINISH IT. half a story is worse than no story at all so either finish it NOW or delete it NOW.

More Chapters

That was awesome but too short, I wanna know what happens now? Does Ashley get pregnant or what? lol

what an ass this writer is

only a true asshole would post part of a story then leave the readers hanging. a REAL writer would make sure the story was started properly (this wasn't) had a proper plot and was brought to a PROPER END (this was far from finished). this writer should be ASHAMED of himself for posting a partial story this needs to be either finished or deleted at once. if the loser writer doesn't have the time or guts to finish it properly then he needs to find a ghost writer to do it for him. you wasted your time, our time and the sites space with this unfinished so called story.

This is good !

Just a shame you finished it after only two chapters.

You should continue, you do write a good story !