by SugarandSalt
Wow...just wow...I really enjoyed this story...as I have most of your work...Please don't stop writing...
you have gone beyond the normal and entered an area all of us wish could be true. Please continue writing.
great story, although it'd have preferred if she'd have fucked with Charlene instead of jeff in the end
This story really got me going. You should continue it, either that or develop the main characters, Ashley and Charlene. I'd love to hear more adventures about them. It would be interesting to see how they grow and develop, together and apart. Keep it up!
id like to ask for more please. i loved it and really hope that charlene gets some ashley ass. now you said that ashley is about 7 inchs, and that charlene is bigger. HOW much bigger? that question has me drooling for an answer.
I really enjoyed the plot of this story (though I wouldn't complain about Charlene getting involved either). One thing that did keep me from enjoying it 100 percent was the language. Terms like "anus" and "jack off grease" just really turned me off when I found them.
This was fucking hot. I know you said it's a true story, but you should really continue it. I would have loved to be in Jeff's shoes lol
So, if being a top is supposedly all that better for these shemales, universally and without any exceptions...
Why do all your guys (from your stories, I mean) so easily give that up and end up being bottoms after a single fuck?
Sugar,
Charlene wouldn't happen to be based on you, would she? This is perhaps my favorite of your stories, by the way.
This story has to get a second part. I'd really like to hear about Charlene getting a piece of Jeff.
quote//So, if being a top is supposedly all that better for these shemales, universally and without any exceptions...
Why do all your guys (from your stories, I mean) so easily give that up and end up being bottoms after a single fuck?
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well, dumbass, there are plenty of gay bottoms and tops, of doms and subs, of femmes and butch, and TS tops and bottoms, no-one said it was better for ALL shemales, but it IS BETTER for SOME!
this is the POV of one of those, it doesn't say anywhere that this speaking about ALL shemales, just these two...
i hate people saying dumb shit about things that they know dickly about...
Hope there is more chpters. Yes I would also like jeff get ass fucked by charleen. Also maybe get other males asses great story
Exactly where I am in my life. Let's hope my bottom boy is ready!
You are sooo incourageable and a danm fine writer. A great combination young Lady!
Great story summed up with this pleasure..."Being the fucked made him harder than being the fucker had ever made him." I'd love to be the fucked except I want to be flat on my back so I could look at my beautiful girlfriend in her eyes and she can see the exquisite pleasure on my face she is giving me as she drills me deeply!
You didn't rush anything in this story. In fact you wrote it as if the sex was just part of the story and not the whole deal. Great job. I enjoyed it very much.
DAMN, wish you could be my gurl friend ! ! ! ! I'd love to have you fuck me every day ! ! ! !
How had I never read this story before? It's freaking amazing!
Um, yes. You have excellent mechanics, and a personal style that helps draw the reader in. Excellent storytelling. The story itself shows good character development as the Ashley and Charlene learn more about each other, and Ashley about herself.
Seriously, it's freaking amazing! I agree with others that there is easily room for a sequel or a series. Of course, it's writer's prerogative, so whatever you choose.
Writing is a gift or talent or both. I hope you always find ways to use it.
At the expense of repeating comments made by others, I loved the story and thought the plot realistic. While at least one reviewer thought it unrealistic for the guy to so easily consent to the bottom role, I would have happily submitted to Ashley without the reticence demonstrated by Jeff.
Loved it, especially page 3 when an empowered Ashley gets to revenge fuck her ex's ass. Yum!
Great story,hope we hear more fro Ashley, Jeffery and the very sexy Charlene,….awesome