All Comments on 'Last Mission Ch. 06'

just F****ing brilliant!

right amount of sex and violence

good story write anoter one

Dear readers,

This is my first series. Both positive and negative comments will spur me to write more. I have a thick skin, so please go ahead and be a critic!

Author of Last Mission

A pretty good start, though I did expect a bit more sex.

Based on the intended plot line, this could have been a heck of a story, but it falls flat both in its erotic and suspenseful impact. Keep trying but this one just doesn't make it.

Well written,very intense. Some said short chapters, I say good pacing. Please continue

Thanks for sharing.

It was quite entertaining although any explicit sex was missing, a disappointment on a porn site. Thank you for writing.

This is a classic easy-to-read yarn that appeals to both men and women. All the sexploitative elements are present - a strong, sexy, deadly female lead; intricate plots of revenge; misplaced loyalty and betrayal; brutal violence and a whiff of sex. Overall, an unforgettable revenge series with echoes of Kill Bill.

Really gd story but needed a lot more sex xx