Anal realism required? Suggest Author's personal indulgence in practical research, preferably before writing a chapter 09!
In reality; immediately following the male orgasm, callous withdrawal of a shrunken penis would benefit neither participant in consensual anal sex, unless immediately replaced by the painless insertion of an 'equivilent dimension of' anal plug to prevent an embarrassing leakage. EG: Colonic irrigation produces natural anal spasms causing human defacation, unless that can be prevented by artificial means!
Normally I don't answer anonymous comments but your reading comprehension is so low that I felt compelled to point out that nowhere did I say that he pulled out immediately. In fact, he does not pull out of her ass during the story at all. At the end of this chapter, he's still buried in it.
While constructive criticism is always appreciated, yours is neither constructive NOR correct.
Also, you might try looking up the definition of "fantasy" before reading other fictional erotica.
Thank you for your time
~Angel
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Anonymous05/23/12
Superb
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Anonymous05/23/12
Well said! Cant wait till she has them both at the same time. Don't keep.us waiting too long
I am loving this series not only do I want to know what Jessica does next I want to go to the school and I find myself spinning fantasies in my head about what will happen when they get back home and yet nothing I spin is close to the brilliance you putt on the page please keep this up I just want to know what classes are we going to next week
I have been reading this series trying to catch up with the speed with which you write them. in one word I ambreathless. Each class has affected me as a reader especially the latest one when Jessica lost her anal cherry. I am much more inclined to experiment in that area even though it is a fantasy. Keep up the good work.
This series is beautifully written and the characters are so real and hot. I really hope there will be more to come. Keep up the great work :)
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Anonymous11/01/12
Im gonna start up a school like this
omg! These stories are amazing! U have a total erotica gift! U should be a author and i would buy every single one of ur books! Ur stories are amazing.. I wish i was jessica :(
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Anal realism required? Suggest Author's personal indulgence in practical research, preferably before writing a chapter 09!
In reality; immediately following the male orgasm, callous withdrawal of a shrunken penis would benefit neither participant in consensual anal sex, unless immediately replaced by the painless insertion of an 'equivilent dimension of' anal plug to prevent an embarrassing leakage. EG: Colonic irrigation produces natural anal spasms causing human defacation, unless that can be prevented by artificial means!
Dear Anonymous
Normally I don't answer anonymous comments but your reading comprehension is so low that I felt compelled to point out that nowhere did I say that he pulled out immediately. In fact, he does not pull out of her ass during the story at all. At the end of this chapter, he's still buried in it.
While constructive criticism is always appreciated, yours is neither constructive NOR correct.
Also, you might try looking up the definition of "fantasy" before reading other fictional erotica.
Thank you for your time
~Angel
Superb
Well said! Cant wait till she has them both at the same time. Don't keep.us waiting too long
Bring on the next week of classes
I am loving this series not only do I want to know what Jessica does next I want to go to the school and I find myself spinning fantasies in my head about what will happen when they get back home and yet nothing I spin is close to the brilliance you putt on the page please keep this up I just want to know what classes are we going to next week
Playing catch up
I have been reading this series trying to catch up with the speed with which you write them. in one word I ambreathless. Each class has affected me as a reader especially the latest one when Jessica lost her anal cherry. I am much more inclined to experiment in that area even though it is a fantasy. Keep up the good work.
Brilliant!
This series is beautifully written and the characters are so real and hot. I really hope there will be more to come. Keep up the great work :)
Im gonna start up a school like this
omg! These stories are amazing! U have a total erotica gift! U should be a author and i would buy every single one of ur books! Ur stories are amazing.. I wish i was jessica :(
sigh
just (contented sigh(
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