Love Beyond All Bounds Ch. 04

this one seemed rushed and disjointed, but glad april told him and hope he will take her and be her only partner so she doesnt become a slut like her mom that would ruin a nice relationship and love she has for her brother.

Name change

got confused when Danielle suddenly became his mother

continuity error?

the switch in scenes between fucking Danielle and fucking Ilene was very abrupt without any clear demarcation. I suspect the author intended to insert some sort of transition but it got lost somewhere along the way.

One thing I have noticed about FinalStand's work, that I have read so far, is the quality of post-production editing. Few errors and good continuity along the storylines.

I think many viewers fail to comprehend the complexity of trying to get any reliable degree of cooperation between the multitude of Word Processor programs, in different incompatible versions, across all the different OS and communication systems. That any of this works to deliver a legible product to the readers should be considered a remarkable event every, single time.

April deserves

to be moms mistress, and get a good fucking by her brother.