by FinalStand
this one seemed rushed and disjointed, but glad april told him and hope he will take her and be her only partner so she doesnt become a slut like her mom that would ruin a nice relationship and love she has for her brother.
the switch in scenes between fucking Danielle and fucking Ilene was very abrupt without any clear demarcation. I suspect the author intended to insert some sort of transition but it got lost somewhere along the way.
One thing I have noticed about FinalStand's work, that I have read so far, is the quality of post-production editing. Few errors and good continuity along the storylines.
I think many viewers fail to comprehend the complexity of trying to get any reliable degree of cooperation between the multitude of Word Processor programs, in different incompatible versions, across all the different OS and communication systems. That any of this works to deliver a legible product to the readers should be considered a remarkable event every, single time.
to be moms mistress, and get a good fucking by her brother.
Whether forcedor not, mother ma be developing into some sort of mother. After 22 and 18 years, respectively, psychologically, ego, id, self-awareness, self-assuredness and sense of self/self-worth is hard to change. This is a very good story. Hopefully, the psychological development of the characters will be attempted.