I almost agree with anonymous that this chapter is too short, too rushed. But I am considering that the author's purpose of these very tight scenes is to prepare us for the following chapters without confusing overlap. That several events important to the overall story were covered. Providing key background material that would otherwise slow down the denouement barreling at us.
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chapters are too short they seem like notes
hhmmmh
I almost agree with anonymous that this chapter is too short, too rushed. But I am considering that the author's purpose of these very tight scenes is to prepare us for the following chapters without confusing overlap. That several events important to the overall story were covered. Providing key background material that would otherwise slow down the denouement barreling at us.
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