by YourLovelyDream
I am surprised no one has commented this story is amazing. I hope to see more from you.
The editing could use some touching up. I feel that would only benefit a very intriguing concept. So far the main char seems fun, and who doesn't love a tall hot love interest. I declare good marks and keep writing... Please.
This has peaked my interesting so I'm going to chapter 2 right now, yes right now!