All Comments on 'The Jealous Lover'

this wasn't romance, it was crap and should have been crap in the loving wives category. get it right, next time, fool.

I agree with Anon - I don't like the story either. It was written as an exercise and once written, what the hell ...

As for the categorization, most of my stories don't fit any of the literotica categories. I think it all depends on perspective. I'd prefer to leave everything uncategorized, but then there would be chaos and that sucks too.

Anyway, thanks for taking notice. Sorry for the crap.

well, for me the story as a whole have a very great potential into it. I just want a bit more raw emotions coming off of it, which can be done maybe by setting up a POV (specially for Tom). I won't say that this is CRAP. It's not CRAP at all! I do love the whole idea on the beginning. Like how it simply connects with the ending.

Please write a story inspired by this story of yours. Even though I'm a ghost reader I would highly appreciate it.

well, for me the story as a whole have a very great potential into it. I just want a bit more raw emotions coming off of it, which can be done maybe by setting up a POV (specially for Tom). I won't say that this is CRAP. It's not CRAP at all! I do love the whole idea on the beginning. Like how it simply connects with the ending.

Please write a story inspired by this story of yours. Even though I'm a ghost reader I would highly appreciate it.