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What a Chicken
You post this trash and then delete the negative comments? You can't be that naive. What did you expect a Pulitzer prize for this tripe? It was poorly written.poorly concieved and just a lousy story. Butch up Otto. You can delete this now
Fuck
I hate authors who delete comments. You deleted my comment so now delete this:
FUCK YOU AND EVERYBODY THAT LOOKS LIKE YOU.
PRICK
HA HA HA
To the trolls, anonymous and otherwise.
Get a life and stop trolling stuff that doesn't appeal to you. There's a remedy to stories that you don't like.....it's called NOT READING THEM.
betrayal
his cornhole reamed, he smoked the fat cut cock, betrayed!
To the last troll.....
...did you actually read this story or just skim through it? To whom are you referring here?
Yo Otto Take a Deep Breath
Have to agree with previous comments. Why delete them? Because you do not agree with them? They are opinions Otto Just that. You are going to argue against someone having an opinion different than yours? Instead of telling people not to read your stories why dont you write something that is not a rehash from 2009? Sad really. You can delete this now as well
Those who can....write....
....those who can't, troll. Anonymously or otherwise.
Soap box derby
Lots of sexy dialogue, then lots of sex. What's not to like? Well, there is just about zero tension. Everything is too easy, even the pizza order instead of bacon and eggs!
The closest thing to a potential problem is Carlita's hubby in prison, who MIGHT not be on board with Carlita's getting ga-ga about the guy with the dip-stick checking her fluid levels! (but even he is a fair time from parole, essentially incommunicado, and reaming his roomie!)
Tension creates interest ... Will Stacy finally get drilled by the Ottomeister? She resolved that early in their first dialogue. There are NO problems to conquer. 3*
Title explanation
Soap box derbies are run totally downhill ... Piece of cake!
Holy. Fuck!!! This was bad.
And not in a good way, there was nothing reading in this poor excuse of a story except the comments. Is it possible to give a negative rating?
re: To the trolls, anonymous and otherwise.
"There's a remedy to stories that you don't like.....it's called NOT READING THEM."
That only makes sense if you can tell what is in a story without reading it, which pretty much means it must have been written without any talent, thought, effort, etc.
You forgot one Cervantes....
...those who can but don't read a few paragraphs till they see how hilariously sophomoric it is than settle down to read the best parts.(See comments)
Thanks ***
For the read.
Not good.
2**
DWmoroncock is so stupid
she thinks Johnny Cash is a pay toilet
RIP Otto Hauser
This man who you have trashed left me his password in case of emergencies like his death. Maybe he had a premonition of his passing. I think so. He wrote much better than you credited for and you should be ashamed of yourselves. As his ex-wife, I hope that you look long and hard in the mirror. I know that I have, wishing that I could do undo the way that I treated at times in the past. Shame on us all.
I miss you, Otto. I looked forward to more chapters, both of this story and of our life once more together, but neither was to be. The Great Spirit called you home. May you rest under Father Sky and Mother Earth.
Sincerely
Denise. (I forgot to add this in my grief).
RIP Otto Hauser
Sorry for your loss Denise. However if this was his attitude of love. marriage and fidelity I can see why your are an ex. All this tale does is glorify cheating. I hate cheaters.
Thank you for your condolences, but trust me...
....he wasn't bad. He was just a rebel against the system of monogamy. I didn't understand his vision for the world at the time. Now, however, I do....I know that we just needed time apart and then we could get back together....but it wasn't to be. He was a great man, a true Socialist and advocate of free love.
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