Yay, another chapter. Somewhat mellow, but super erotic at the same time. The Master is so powerful and you can feel his confidence and strength. Sex or no sex, he is hot! Looking forward to more!
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Anonymous09/19/13
love!!
I love your story, it's very sexy!!!!! I have read some of your other stories and they are all amazing! Write a book...I would buy it! congratulations!
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Anonymous12/29/13
damn
this is fantastic, many steps above the average literotica story
I have been trying to find a story like the one in my head for a while now and I finally find you. Thank you so very much!!! Now for the how, How do you take scenes out of your mind and write them so good on "paper" that they seem to be happening for real? My sister can do the same thing. But when I try the words just stay a fantasy. Please tell me there will be more stories. Maybe a time travel Bdsm love story. THANKS AGAIN!!!!!
English
Write faster please. :D
Loving this story. I hope you post many chapters. :)
Yay!
Yay, another chapter. Somewhat mellow, but super erotic at the same time. The Master is so powerful and you can feel his confidence and strength. Sex or no sex, he is hot! Looking forward to more!
love!!
I love your story, it's very sexy!!!!! I have read some of your other stories and they are all amazing! Write a book...I would buy it! congratulations!
damn
this is fantastic, many steps above the average literotica story
fantastic ....
I find you at last and How?
I have been trying to find a story like the one in my head for a while now and I finally find you. Thank you so very much!!! Now for the how, How do you take scenes out of your mind and write them so good on "paper" that they seem to be happening for real? My sister can do the same thing. But when I try the words just stay a fantasy. Please tell me there will be more stories. Maybe a time travel Bdsm love story. THANKS AGAIN!!!!!
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