All Comments on 'Offspring Ch. 013'

Too bad that this is listed as chapter 13 in a thirteen part series. It was refreshing to have some good science fiction by someone who knows how to spell. Hopefully it will continue.

This is getting better and better. Keep it up :D

buddy keep it coming great job done

Haven't read the later chapters yet, but I had to chuckle at the inclusion of Pumpernickel in his report -- it seems an intentional Red Herring. 😄