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ANYTIME BACCHUS GET INVOLVED
the party continues in reveling and debauchery. TK U MLJ LV NV
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god you have a way with words ;)
Nicely done.
This is my favorite kind of poetry with descriptions of a place and observations with a tone to convey the mood. You wrote this so well that I felt like I was there.
Nice Imagery
A pretty concoction
I quite liked this.
Evocative of a different place (different for me, anyway), and I loved the lines:
the only person calling anyone daddy
was paid to do so
well
done! the world is evidently the same
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