I know, I know. I should have written "Quotation marks are NOT optional".
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Anonymous05/27/12
This is a very good story and hope you will write another chapter ! We need to she wants to do to Keith next. What does he want to do that Lisa won't do ??
Thank you !
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Anonymous05/27/12
Good Story, Badly Written
Please pick a tense and stick with it! At the very least, don't change tenses in the same sentence. Also, most people nod their head for "yes" and shake their head for "no." There's a good idea here, it's just hidden by bad writing.
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Quoatation marks are NOT optional
'nuff said.
re: Quoatation marks are NOT optional
I know, I know. I should have written "Quotation marks are NOT optional".
This is a very good story and hope you will write another chapter ! We need to she wants to do to Keith next. What does he want to do that Lisa won't do ??
Thank you !
Good Story, Badly Written
Please pick a tense and stick with it! At the very least, don't change tenses in the same sentence. Also, most people nod their head for "yes" and shake their head for "no." There's a good idea here, it's just hidden by bad writing.
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