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A Brother's Duty Ch. 3

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by bornagain12/30/06

The baby

Are you going to write about Di having the baby and Di and Larry possibly getting married to each other or will leave her and the baby afterwards?
Pat.
Atlanta,Ga

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by oldwayne09/03/10

A beautiful little tale.

Thanks so much for really good love story. I'm not sure it is in the right category, but it sure is a fine story.

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by Anonymous01/02/11

a love story

Thanks for a delightful story or love and caring... Of helping another in the most intimate fashion allowing the participants to share and further their relationship.
I'd like to hear more and know they had that child and shared even more!! A beautiful story.

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by DWornock09/15/11

Very nice. I gave it 5*****

When I think about it, I guess that is good ending. However, it did feel like it needed more.

Actually the story was far too short to be more than 1 chapter.

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by oldwayne11/01/15

Sad tale.

Still gave it 5 Stars!

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