Tease the Bull...Payback!

Now, that is how a great author pens a decent story!

Excellent revenge story to make up for that first effort.

Great Read

Thanks.

Nice Ending

This was a nice ending to the first story. Well done.This had a symmetry to it that the first did not. Thanks 5*

WHEN THE TORO DOES WIN

the matador and peccadillos suffer, TK U MLJ LV NV

flowery ending

Decorative in its flamboyance, one could almost say florid. Bloomed and decorated in flowers to be sure, well done.

It was a good story!

But I cannot enjoy murder in my coffee....

Public Scandal???

When was there a public scandal that Kyran had to live down???
How did Kyran know about New Sweety before the divorce was final? New Sweety had to poke our Hero in the eyes with her bosom before HE knew, and that was Day Of!
Details ... They count!

Want murder, He pleaded the fifth

Kyan said in the first story she ruined her own life and she did it freely. Will just cleaned up the mess. 4 stars, I wish you would have put in the scandal.

I like the way you write will responding....

...but not having read part one,(or despite that?) -it is hard to care about these people, or at least her, and 3 years is how long high school crushes last, not marriages with much invested.

A very interesting story

Revenge is so sweet especially when you get away with it.

A well written story and an interesting storyline with a happy ending.

Thanks for the read.

How many minutes til Wapner, huecuck?

Only fitting that an admitted cuckold like huecuck wear the distinguished title of Rain Man of Cuckoldry. He can't spell or write a complete sentence but he can count the hell out a box of toothpicks!

good story until

yet another author thinks sexual missbehaviour has to be followed by a death sentance. this is as dumb as this fucking terrorist who also live in middle age.

stealing another mans pussy

is worse than stealing his horse. hang them high is ok. it is just a story.

Scandal?

I thought the 3 million paid him off and there wouldn't be a scandal. The guy is a prick/asshole by using blackmail as his revenge. Besides that, shouldn't he have expected his wife would be an easy lay for other guys? After all, they did fuck on their first "date," and she kept wanting kinkier and kinkier sex.

Excellent Modern Figaro Type Revenge story blendig with a little Cruel Revenge

1. I think the 3 types revenge stories: Among the Cruel, the Modern Figaro Type and the Romantic Revenge Stories it is the most difficult to write a Modern Figaro Type Revenge Story. Abreviations: CRS, MFTRS and RRS. I like all three types of the Revenge Stories. The MFTRS wants one or more original tricks which may be near to the law border other side, but our hero or the friends of our hero are succesful to avoid the inquiry of the autothority. Generaly the MFTRS is the most humorous, but SS06 is succesful to bring humor in a CRS as well. The most exact protagonist of the MFTRS is FrancisMacomber "The Six O'clock News Slot", I show this example instead of "The Honey Trap", because here the modern Figaro is the friend of the husband. The Revenge Stories blend the 3 types and the main thread featured the main type of the revenge story.
2. This story has an excellent idea the blackmail scen, which is a good example for such step which is generaly out the legal life border but it may be without punishment. However I think the 1 million $ would have been enough for this cheating bitch, but I am not living in the USA.
3. The Cruel Revenge was outsourcing for others. His treating for her is good for me and a good contrast to the Fieldind's solution of this problem. This is a good fable story principle in the story.
4. The virgin girl is an seldom dream nowday, but it does not matter I approve for this good MFTRS.
5. I think good and manly the humorous revenge stories are good at inreasing the serotonin level in the brain for buddies who stands before divorce decide to avoid deep depression, as a good medicin is.
6. The critic is only the restaurent scen, where the 2 participiants speak each other as member of the parlament or house of common, etc. The conversation may be a little shifted with 2 participiants.
6. Naturaly 5 stars and Thank You

It went from good to shit

Libby did nothing against him that warranted a death sentance, neither did David. I say this because while adultery is immoral, he benefitted from her cheating to the tune of 3 million. What he did was murder for murders sake. And Libbyu? He is responsible for her death as surely as if he put a gun to her head and pulled the trigger. But his actions showed his true colors, that of a coward and the only thing you do with cowards is court martial them and shoot them.

I say we call the cops and rat out Will

Let's see. He married a near-virgin (who he fucked on the first date) and then was caught by surprise when she wanted to learn if there was more to sex than what he supplied.

So she cheats on him and he lets her walk unharmed. He gets a cool three million and a better wife (though she's even less experienced), but he decides he still has to kill two people because...what? They hurt his pride? Soiled something he didn't want anyway? The guy's a psycho.

I liked the first installment of this story (I didn't read it both times though). This twisted, er, Bull, only get 2 stars from me.

if u dont like dont read revenge stories

there is lots of losers who didnt like this story because 2 no moral person die.
IF U PLAY WITH FIRE U CAN DIE SO DONT PLAY WITH IT
and for these loser i know who u r man (cuckold) woman (whore) that why u r angry because like all losers who think they r open-minded people but didnt like to hear others option and always think what they do is right even its wrong

Tremendous

Hooray. A non-cuck, a non-wimp. A real man. Wonderful.
Question:
What do you do with a cheating wife and her lover?
Answer:
Read this great tale and you will know.
I was a little concerned after the first chapter but you put all my fears and question's aside and made the hero of this story take care of business.

OH YEAH

Iscariot

a fat cock is smoked, a cornhole is buggered, betrayed!

The David and Libby sympathisers are pathetic...

It wasn't Will who made them "disappear", it was somebody else with a conscious of their own. If they decided the two adulterers must die (something which I do not advocate) then it was their call, not Will's. He didn't instruct anybody to inflict harm on the adulterers, he only exercised his moral obligation to notify a party that was being cruelly deceived. This action isn't detestable and any reaction to the disclosure is not on his head.

If David and Libby could enjoy Kyran at the expense of her marriage, then Will could enjoy 3 million at their expense.

I gave both stories 5 stars! Keep on writing...

SCUM DAVID N VILLAIN WILL

WHY WOULD WILL HAV TO MARRY, THEN RUIN KYRAN FOR LIFE, WHEN HE ALREADY KNOWS SHE IS KINKY?? I AM STRONGLY AGAINST CHEATING. BUT WILL HAD THE CHOICE NOT TO MARRY HER IN FIRST PLACE.

is that you BILLY?

loved it!

I very much enjoyed ch2. perfect ending. Thanks

Thank you Cueball

I really enjoyed that story except for the wire thing at the end, I just don't know why your score is not higher. Thanks for the write

Thanks Cueball ...

....for balancing the scales! For once, a cheating whore wife was not taken back by a Cuck/Wimp husband, she got what she deserved along with her p.o.s. partners! To bad Kyran wasn't on the motorcycle with the arrogant ( and now dead ) asshole!!

Cheating wife and her confederates are served a cold plate of revenge.

The story flowed in staccato rather than smoothly but still worked. The wife's payback was more abstract than her confederates in her cheating circle. The revenge was not detailed nor the employ of the three million in hush money. The story had a lop sided embrace to the sway of the wife's cheating. The husband's behavior was rather laid back for a man in love and it presented issues of plausibility. Nevertheless the story's lack of style was enhanced by its content.

5*

Your writing skills are excellent but the dialogues, though much appriciated, could use some punching up - with more realisic verbiage. The spoken words were not credible as normal speech. They were more suited for expository narrative.

All in all though, your two chapters are far superior in plot, character development, and presentation than most of the recent new writers. Hope to read much more of your stories.

Good story!

Thanks a good story!

Good old Will was smarter than he looked.

He went pretty easy on his ex-wife but exacted a harsh (well-deserved) retribution on the others at fault. That dark cable was a good one.

Kyran was a victim of her own desires, some folks just can't stand prosperity.

An enjoyable and believable tale. Applause Applause

A pleasurable read to say the least. Creative in script by a author who understands the English language. I must offer "applause applause" at the most basic guilt committed by an overwhelming flock of scribes. No spelling errors. I know most think that minor, but believe me, nothing sours the drink more rapidly than a plethora of spelling errors.
"Tease the Bull" : entertaining, believable and exuberance at the plaudits handed to Kyran and her band of misfits. 5 Stars

The murders were

turds in the punchbowl of what would have been a good revenge story.

5⭐

I like it when bad people die.

What I liked best about this little tale of woe,

was that although the hubby wasn't as big as the stud dicking his wife he stood up to him and assured him that he was a man and not a mouse. Unless you get ambushed or there are too many people opposing you a smaller, prepared man can at least hold his own. In too many of these stories when the man is smaller than the freak of nature that his wife chooses over him he just nuts up and crawls away to enjoy being a bitch. Shouldn't have to happen. If the dreaded "BBC" is on the scene attached to an NFL lineman and you can get out, shoot his ass from across the street. Don't have to take shit. Or it could be a big white or yellow or chestnut cock, doesn't matter. Same drill.

I like the story. Way to handle the problem. Be sad over it, cry over it but unless you are Quasimoto you can always come out on the other side dating and stuff. 5 stars, of course.

point of view

I must say, I disagree with rick-o. The punch bowl should have included one more turd. She instigated the whole thing.